英语求职信的写作细节(2)

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  三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用:

  as for salary, i do not know what to say. would $4,500 a month be too much?

  do you think i would be asking too much if i said 5,000 dollars a month?

  you know what my services are worth better than i do. all i want is a living wage.

  四、关于求职信的结尾用语,下面也有三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。

  a:

  (1)软弱、羞怯的:if you think i can fill the position after you have read my letter, i shall be glad to talk with you.

  (2)改写后(较佳):if my qualifications meet your standards, i would be happy to speak with you in person.

  b:

  (1)怀疑,不妥、不安全的:if you are interested, please let me know immediately, as i'm sure an interview will convince you i'm the man for the job.

  (2)改写后:i would like to request an interview. you can reach me by telephone at beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.

  c:

  (1)哀求式的句子,不够完整(漏掉面谈时间):i would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. i can be reached by calling beijing 12345678.

  (2)改写后:may i have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? my telephone number is beijing 12345678. you can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day.

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