往年高考英语作文满分回顾(2)

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往年高考英语作文满分回顾(2)

　　参考词汇:

往年高考英语作文满分回顾(2)

　　· 推荐 recommend (V.)

　　· 英汉/汉英词典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary (ECCED)

　　· 新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD)

　　Dear Steve,

　　I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.

　　I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.

　　The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.

　　Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.

　　Yours,

　　Li Yue

　　[名师点评]

　　本文要完成的是书信的主要部分，因此不需要注意格式，但是不能遗漏要点。本文要点齐全，内容完整，详略得到。介绍的时候，层次清晰，逐一举例。文章流畅而连贯。有很多关于词汇和字典的表述，值得我们积累。

　　【全国卷II】

　　【试题回放】

　　假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：

　　1. 上午：学校活动2.下午：游览市区3. 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天

　　注意：1. 词数：100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：安排arrange

　　Dear Andy,

　　I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I’m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.

　　In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You’ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.

　　In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I’ll act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.

　　At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in. I’m sure you’ll enjoy yourself. I’m looking forward to your coming.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li hua

　　[名师点评]

　　本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。

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